Hey guys! It's me again recently Mr. Sanderl gave all GT students a project, My Visual Poem. My poem is about the rush I feel when I approach the field and play my favorite sport Soccer and how passionate I am about the exciting sport; just letting my spirit flow free while the air guides me to the goal. How I have worked so hard to accomplish my goal of being the best soccer player I can be.The visuals made an impact by really expressing the feelings of the story and showing the viewers what really happens when I go to soccer, when I get ready to practice and the game.
The special effects I added were pretty good. In my opinion I think that my special effects really brought interest because they were all so cool like the Kens burn effect, the dissolves, etc. All of them added this really awesome extra to the video. It captured the excitement I felt when dribbling the ball towards the goal and shoot the ball as hard as I can into the goal. The audience will probably love the effects I brought into the video and the rush when it dissolves and the Kens Burn effect and a whole bunch of other stuff.
There were some difficulties in making the film like some shots weren't focused enough or the camera was very stable. The hardest thing was putting all the clips together and having someone else shoot something of me that I wanted to shoot, but I couldn't. Another problem is that I had to get a lot of footage but I didn't get to use all of it because some clips were too long and it didn't make sense if I cut off a little bit of some clips and left some other stuff and it was just very frustrating.
The video overall I thought was Great!! I think that I did a really good job filming and editing and just thinking of the ideas. My poem was on point it sounded great the way I expressed my feelings and how I made the shot feel the rush I have when dribbling down the field. I really liked the shot if me when tying my shoes and walking on/off the field. I really can't choose which shot I liked best because they're all so great, but they do have some problems with them.
Great topic I like soccer
ReplyDeleteYou should work on having stable shots
I love how you got shots from practice and your games
I liked how you gave your opionen on the topic
ReplyDeleteyou camara was unsteady at some points
I liked your picture of you and your friends
1. I like the writing piece
ReplyDelete2. So many camera movement
3. The last part when you were doing tricks with the soccer ball is amazing
I like all the close angle shots
ReplyDeleteYou need to practice your A-Roll a bit better, you are speaking really slow
I love how you describe soccer, for example "The whistle Blows" to start and end the game
The text effects draw my attention specifically the "Soccer" that disappears into sparkles
ReplyDeleteNo complaints here either
I like how you put the poem together, Very well done
I really liked your close up of the goalie.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't really see you running towards the goal in a shot.
I loved how you you showed your self practicing and great picture with the team.
I like how you described soccer and what it means to you
ReplyDeleteThe camera movement was ok but at times distracting
Some powerful words you said in your visual poem
I like the effects
ReplyDeleteSome shots are shaky
I like the angel of shots
Great topic about soccer I kinda like soccer
ReplyDeleteI hear a fan noise again
Great shots they are fun to watch
You have really good shots of you playing soccer.
ReplyDeleteIn the wide shot of you playing soccer in a game, I couldn't tell which one was you because it was so far away.
Your poem was written very well, it seems like soccer means a lot to you.
I loved the way you started off, the way you showed yourself getting ready.
ReplyDeleteWhen you showed the word the word went a little fast.
I loved the way you showed the goalie and how she tryed for the ball.
great last shot
ReplyDeleteYou have the last shot twice
Nice team shot
I like all of your transitions
ReplyDeleteone of the shots were really wobely
I like all of the words you put up on screan
I like the shots you took
ReplyDeleteYou should use more effects
Great shot of the ball hitting the goal
Good B-roll like the goalie shot
ReplyDeletemaybe you could use a little more effects
cool shot at the end of you dribbling the ball
I like the lighting in all your clips.
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot of camera movement that isn't stable.
I like how you got that shot of you kicking the ball into the goal.
nice voice over it is really descriptive
ReplyDeletea little camera movement
good b-roll it shows a lot.
I really like how you got so much action shots of you and your team playing
ReplyDeleteThere could be more actions when your playing with a soccer ball
And your poem was really well written
The shots of your soccer game were really good
ReplyDeleteThe poem could have used more effects
Your audio was really well spoken
•The writing of the poem was really good
ReplyDelete•Some of the b-roll was kinda shaky
•The Text layovers at the end were pretty cool
I really like the different angles you got like the goalie jumping for the ball
ReplyDeleteSome shots were a little bit shaky
I really like the the pacing of your words in your poem
I liked your ken burns effect on that picture!
ReplyDeleteThere was some camera movement
Really great soccer shots!
I really like your visual poem Talia! I liked all the different b-roll you had in your project.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could've done better is apply what your saying to the b-roll a little better.
I liked the effects that you used in your story.
I like how your voice is so clear
ReplyDeleteThere could be more actions when your playing
I like how your visuals match with the words with your poem